Allusion in Poetry

Allusion, according to A Handbook to Literature byIn a place of cloudless skies,
C. Hugh Holman, The Odyssey Press, "is a figureOf love, peace, and endless joy,
of speech making casual reference to a famousSunlight gleams without a storm,
historical or literary figure or event." According toGlory found in every form.
definitions in various literature and compositionI will take forever life
text books, an allusion is the casual reference to aIn the place where He's alive,
figure or event in history or literature that createsTo know that everyone there
a mental image in the mind of the reader.Need not be separated
All right, young man in the back, what's theNor ever feel incarcerated.
problem? I hear you whispering. Maybe I canNo pain, no illness, no tears
answer your question better than your neighbor.Will be seen much less known,
"Uh, well, I just think maybe you have confusedWar, a word not even heard.
something. Isn't an allusion something you see thatYes, I will live forever
isn't there?"Once I cross Jordan's river.
Thank you. I'm so glad you asked that question.In the Bible, the river Jordan came to mean the
Many people do confuse allusion and illusion. Anriver that one crosses into Heaven, therefore
allusion is the reference to someone or somethingrepresenting death.
in literature or history. Illusion is something which isIn the first poem, the allusion adds to the emotion
not actually seen or which does not really exist.of agony, pain, torture. However, in the second
One example of an allusion would be somethingpoem, the allusion adds to the imagery but not
like "Like a modern Daniel, the brave little boyexactly to the emotion.
strode to the playground in order to face theSo what allusion brings an emotional image to
school bully." The reference to Daniel from themind? What does Sir Gallahad bring to mind?
Bible who faced hungry lions brings bravery toCourage, love, knight in shining armor all come to
mind. Another allusion might be "The Paul Bunyonmind, emotional reactions.
of a man filled the small room."Closure
An illusion might be "Jim Ross told everyone aboutThe young boy's eyes sparkled
the flying saucer he watched in the night sky. HisAs he spied the golden curls
wife shook her head in disbelief. 'You also say youPeeking from under her winter cap.
saw me do a strip tease on the front porch,Since an eight-year-old isn't poetic,
illusions the result of over-inbibing that brew youHe packed snow into a ball
make in the garage'."And threw with all his might,
Many times writers, especially poets, allude toKnocking the hat from her head.
Biblical characters and events. In The Merchant ofImagine his surprise as she whirled
Venice, Shakespeare used the line "A Daniel comeAnd returned fire, hitting his chest,
to judgement." T.S. Eliot uses a complex literaryWhere love for her bloomed.
allusion in his The Waste Land and in his notesOver the years, fast friends
about that poem.They became as they skipped
I use allusion occasionally, as in the followingHand in hand through school.
poems, and many times I allude to somethingHis junior prom, she was his date,
Biblical as I do in these. (All poetry is copyrightedAs was he for hers the next.
by Vivian Gilbert Zabel.)After he left for college,
Lost and FoundLetters, like winged flames,
Screams rend the night darknessFlew from him to her each week.
As chaos reigns in sleeping minds.The summer became a time of joy
Fighting echoing shrieks to awareness,As they rebuilt their love again.
Those once drowsing find themselvesIn fall, they had to part once more,
Now huddling in fear beneath covers.He back to the next level;
Fire flickers through the filter of eyelids,She, to the college in town.
While those braver than the rest peekOnce full of love and laughter,
To glimpse shadows of nightmaresMessages from her came
Lingering in delight of tears streamingSlower and shorter each time.
Down cheeks of those too scared to run.Soon, by Christmas, they stopped.
Then faith reaches out its hopeful handBy end of semester, he heard
To touch and tame the frightful madnessShe gave her love to another.
That only Hell can bring to those who live.His heart turned to stone.
The hero of a demon-filled existenceYears passed, he earned a fortune,
Is the One who loves man the most.But he never had a family.
The allusion to Hell brings to mind the agony thatAt last the loner returned home
is to be found there.To find his lost love not only
Live ForeverAnother's wife, but a mother.
Who wants to live forever?He stood in the background,
So the pain of heart and limbsCan endure everKnowing her husband could be ruined.
lasting?He had the means; he had the hate.
Discomfort will grow each dayThen he saw her face in his mind
Until I won't want to stay.And packed the hate away.
Talk of immortality,He died the other day,
I could greet my grandchildren'sA driver didn't pause or stop.
Progeny for many years.Many attended the funeral
But when their time disappears,With one woman at the back.
I would be overwhelmed with tears.Tears pooled and spilled
I could watch history passBefore she wiped her face,
With war, disease, desolation.Turned, and slipped away.
Leaders would rise and then fall,Only later did she know
Bringing hope, sometimes despair,He left her not only his heart
But never long-lasting care.But everything he had.
I don't want to live forever,Unknown to her, he had been more,
Not in this world we now know.Her Sir Galahad: Although he wore
I want to know that some dayA tarnished, rusted suit of armor.
I will be able to escapeI hope you will try using allusion in your poetry,
To a place not filled with hate.for a touch of imagery if nothing else, but also try
Who wants to live forever?to see if the device can add a dose of emotion.